20 May
Dear diary:
Yesterday it was very cold and had a 15 birthday party. But I hadn’t a sweter to wear. So I ask my mother if my father, that was in a trip, had a sweter. But they were very big for me. So in that moment I said to my mother “see if you had bought me a sweter the other week I’ll has to go now”. Then I was very angry and mom don’t leave myself to go because of that. But I went because I was very angry. It was very cold. When I arrived to Fede’s house he gave to me one sweter, I was lucky. But today on the dinner my sister knew that I went, so she say to e how the birthday was. I want to kill my sister. But my mother doesn’t say anything, I was surprised.
Henry
martes, 24 de junio de 2008
domingo, 22 de junio de 2008
diary entry - juanpablo
22 of June 08.
Dear Diary,Today I am writing to tell you something about my life. Last weekend I had a fifteen's party in Guarani Hotel. It was fun. They are many friends in the party, also people that I had never seen in my life who I danced with. The next day I woke up early and I spended the morning running to the "Costanera". Then I went to my house to eat a hamburger because it was my grandmum's birthday, there I met all my family. After that my best friend called to me to play a football match in "Danper", but I was sick so I couldn't go to play with him. Well, this is the last week, after I am write again.
Dear Diary,Today I am writing to tell you something about my life. Last weekend I had a fifteen's party in Guarani Hotel. It was fun. They are many friends in the party, also people that I had never seen in my life who I danced with. The next day I woke up early and I spended the morning running to the "Costanera". Then I went to my house to eat a hamburger because it was my grandmum's birthday, there I met all my family. After that my best friend called to me to play a football match in "Danper", but I was sick so I couldn't go to play with him. Well, this is the last week, after I am write again.
martes, 17 de junio de 2008
diary entry- Larita
Dear diary:
Today, a day after my 15th birthday, I want to tell you that all the party was like a dream, all was perfect. It was 12 o’clock, and I was getting in with my father and with my beautiful, white dress.. All muy friends were there, looking ^ me. It was very emotional.
I danced all the (iw) night, with my gest (sp/gr), my family and all the people that were there.
Today, I think.. all that preparation, and now all (gr) is something that happened and (iw) very fast, so I’m not very happy in that way, but that night, now and for ever is (gr) the best , an unforgettable memory!
I’ (gr) very happy, I resived (sp) a lot of presents..
Today, a day after my 15th birthday, I want to tell you that all the party was like a dream, all was perfect. It was 12 o’clock, and I was getting in with my father and with my beautiful, white dress.. All muy friends were there, looking ^ me. It was very emotional.
I danced all the (iw) night, with my gest (sp/gr), my family and all the people that were there.
Today, I think.. all that preparation, and now all (gr) is something that happened and (iw) very fast, so I’m not very happy in that way, but that night, now and for ever is (gr) the best , an unforgettable memory!
I’ (gr) very happy, I resived (sp) a lot of presents..
domingo, 15 de junio de 2008
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martes, 10 de junio de 2008
Diary entry - Lucree
Sunday, 15 September
Dear diary:
Yesterday I went to a friend’s birthday party with my friends.
There I have (gr) a lot of fun! I spend (gr) all night with a friend...God! He is (gr) perfect!
I already (iw) met him ^ one of my friends introduce (gr) us. His name is Jack, I met him a couple weekends before (voc). I gave him my telephone-number so he said he can (gr) call me. Yesterday, HE CALLS (gr) ME! We went out. We went, first, to the cinema, and then we went to the park. There we talk (gr) for hours, we talk (gr) about everything, like friends, family…you know…
I’m so happy! We have so much in common! Except for one thing, well, for two things…his friends and the girls…the problem with his friends it’s (gr)that they are really stupid, and with the girls it’s really difficult because all the girls are behind (voc) him. He is a really handsome boy.
So yesterday we have (gr) a great time. He said he’s (gr) gonna call me again one of those (gr) days! I can’t wait! I hope we could be more than friends…
Yesterday I went to a friend’s birthday party with my friends.
There I have (gr) a lot of fun! I spend (gr) all night with a friend...God! He is (gr) perfect!
I already (iw) met him ^ one of my friends introduce (gr) us. His name is Jack, I met him a couple weekends before (voc). I gave him my telephone-number so he said he can (gr) call me. Yesterday, HE CALLS (gr) ME! We went out. We went, first, to the cinema, and then we went to the park. There we talk (gr) for hours, we talk (gr) about everything, like friends, family…you know…
I’m so happy! We have so much in common! Except for one thing, well, for two things…his friends and the girls…the problem with his friends it’s (gr)that they are really stupid, and with the girls it’s really difficult because all the girls are behind (voc) him. He is a really handsome boy.
So yesterday we have (gr) a great time. He said he’s (gr) gonna call me again one of those (gr) days! I can’t wait! I hope we could be more than friends…
Lucreciaaa
Pay attention to the verb tenses!
lunes, 9 de junio de 2008
Diary entry - Flor.B =)
4th June 1996
Dear diary,
Today, was a wonderful day and now I'm very happy. Pablo called me to go to the cinema, there he took my hand. Then we went to the riverside to walk, it was very sweet. Later, my mother called me, so he went with me to my house. When we were going he asked me if I liked Pedro, and I answer no but I didn't have the courage to say that I loved him. Suddenly, I notice that he get sad, so I took the necessary courage and I said him that I loved him. I stayed very nervous because he didn't say anything to me but suddenly he told me that I was the love of his life and he kissed me.
When we were outside of my house I was waiting him to ask me to be his girlfriend but he didn't say anything, he only said that we couldn't be boyfriend and girlfriend because his friend wanted me. But that didn't make me sad or dissapointed me because I know that he want me, I was everything for me.
Dear diary,
Today, was a wonderful day and now I'm very happy. Pablo called me to go to the cinema, there he took my hand. Then we went to the riverside to walk, it was very sweet. Later, my mother called me, so he went with me to my house. When we were going he asked me if I liked Pedro, and I answer no but I didn't have the courage to say that I loved him. Suddenly, I notice that he get sad, so I took the necessary courage and I said him that I loved him. I stayed very nervous because he didn't say anything to me but suddenly he told me that I was the love of his life and he kissed me.
When we were outside of my house I was waiting him to ask me to be his girlfriend but he didn't say anything, he only said that we couldn't be boyfriend and girlfriend because his friend wanted me. But that didn't make me sad or dissapointed me because I know that he want me, I was everything for me.
flooorr
diary entry-juan ojeda
Date?
Dear diary;
Yesterday was a horrible day that all is (gr) wrong.
When I got up my mother started shouting because of my little brother.when I got up she started shouting ^ me with (gr) no reason.
Then, my little brother shouted all day and I have (gr) to play with him, because my mother was preparing dinner for today, my grandmother was helping my mother and my other brother was watching television as the king of scotland.
Last night when my little brother slept (gr), I was going to a party, but my mother said that I was dressed like a gothic person,and I only have (gr) a black shirt. I could not go to the party yesterday so , I kicked all (gr) that I found in my way.
What ^ horrible day, Don´t you think so?
Dear diary;
Yesterday was a horrible day that all is (gr) wrong.
When I got up my mother started shouting because of my little brother.when I got up she started shouting ^ me with (gr) no reason.
Then, my little brother shouted all day and I have (gr) to play with him, because my mother was preparing dinner for today, my grandmother was helping my mother and my other brother was watching television as the king of scotland.
Last night when my little brother slept (gr), I was going to a party, but my mother said that I was dressed like a gothic person,and I only have (gr) a black shirt. I could not go to the party yesterday so , I kicked all (gr) that I found in my way.
What ^ horrible day, Don´t you think so?
domingo, 8 de junio de 2008
Diary entry by Fedelopezz
Date?
Dear Diary
This is (gr) a wonderful day, i have (gr) good marks in math anda (sp) i saw my favourite program (sp), but on (iw) saturday is (gr) not a good day. I had a fifteen year's (voc)party and on friday my mum punished me because i had low marks in english, and when i'm (gr) in (gr) the door to go to fernando's house, my dad call (gr) me, anda (sp) ^ said that ^ don't (gr) give me permission ^^, so i went to my bedroom to sleep. But all my friends went to fernando's house so i cant (gr) lose (gr) ^.
So i escape (gr) for (gr) the window and i put my wilows (voc/sp) under the coat (voc).
Then i jump (gr) to the street and i went to thw (sp) party.
Finally, i come (gr) back to my (iw) home and enter (gr) for (gr)the window again y (???) my mum doesn't (gr) notes (voc/gr) anything.
Dear Diary
This is (gr) a wonderful day, i have (gr) good marks in math anda (sp) i saw my favourite program (sp), but on (iw) saturday is (gr) not a good day. I had a fifteen year's (voc)party and on friday my mum punished me because i had low marks in english, and when i'm (gr) in (gr) the door to go to fernando's house, my dad call (gr) me, anda (sp) ^ said that ^ don't (gr) give me permission ^^, so i went to my bedroom to sleep. But all my friends went to fernando's house so i cant (gr) lose (gr) ^.
So i escape (gr) for (gr) the window and i put my wilows (voc/sp) under the coat (voc).
Then i jump (gr) to the street and i went to thw (sp) party.
Finally, i come (gr) back to my (iw) home and enter (gr) for (gr)the window again y (???) my mum doesn't (gr) notes (voc/gr) anything.
Diary Entry: Fede Aquino
Woooow! Last weekend I had the best 15 ^ party of my life! I don't remember it perfectly, but it was the best night of the year!
I wore a white shirt with squares, and a black suit. There were (gr) a lot of people there, the music was perfect, the food delicious, we were all having fun. I noticed that there were some strange lights, also. Then, they (who?) told me that there (gr) were (gr) brought from France.
The family of this girl is really rich!. Cell phones, shirts, bags and CD's were given AS SOUVENIRS!. A band and a magician performed, too. I can't explain how surprised I was when the magician disappeared a little girl in front of my eyes! what a great trick. But more surprised I was when I saw Eduardo and the rest of Eclip'c's band members. They sang for an hour, and we were all crazy.
The perfect night was complete when I was with her (either you write the name or you use quotation marks). She appeared suddenly and sat at my side, we talk (gr) for a long time and dance (gr) together. Now, we usually talk every day, and that’s why I’m so happy. I promise ^ writing (gr) more news soon.
Fedee.
I wore a white shirt with squares, and a black suit. There were (gr) a lot of people there, the music was perfect, the food delicious, we were all having fun. I noticed that there were some strange lights, also. Then, they (who?) told me that there (gr) were (gr) brought from France.
The family of this girl is really rich!. Cell phones, shirts, bags and CD's were given AS SOUVENIRS!. A band and a magician performed, too. I can't explain how surprised I was when the magician disappeared a little girl in front of my eyes! what a great trick. But more surprised I was when I saw Eduardo and the rest of Eclip'c's band members. They sang for an hour, and we were all crazy.
The perfect night was complete when I was with her (either you write the name or you use quotation marks). She appeared suddenly and sat at my side, we talk (gr) for a long time and dance (gr) together. Now, we usually talk every day, and that’s why I’m so happy. I promise ^ writing (gr) more news soon.
Fedee.
Diary entry by Santi Cadenas
Date?
Yesterday was a great day for me, because we won the URNE tournament. The last match was in Aranduroga court versus Cune.
The match was amazing, the first 40 minutes was(gr) the hardest and longest of my life. Cune started winning 10 to 0, but in the 37 minute the fly half scored a try so the first period finished 10 to 7. cune won.
the seconds (gr) period started so we had 40 minute to change the game, the time passed and we coudn't score but the team of cune was very tired, in the minute 75 the fly half throwed (gr) the ball to me and i broke a tackle and run (gr) to the ingoal of cun (sp), the fullback coudn't catch me so i scored a try and my team won the tournament. it was the best day of my life
Yesterday was a great day for me, because we won the URNE tournament. The last match was in Aranduroga court versus Cune.
The match was amazing, the first 40 minutes was(gr) the hardest and longest of my life. Cune started winning 10 to 0, but in the 37 minute the fly half scored a try so the first period finished 10 to 7. cune won.
the seconds (gr) period started so we had 40 minute to change the game, the time passed and we coudn't score but the team of cune was very tired, in the minute 75 the fly half throwed (gr) the ball to me and i broke a tackle and run (gr) to the ingoal of cun (sp), the fullback coudn't catch me so i scored a try and my team won the tournament. it was the best day of my life
Diary Entry
Date?
Yesterday was a great day for me. I went to Joaquin's house and we have (gr) a lot of fun, there with Facu, Fede, Henry and Joauin (sp) ofcourse (sp) we ate some pizzas and we drank some Cocas (voc).
We have (gr) a lot of fun playing the playstation, as always (gr) I won all the games. If you don't trust me ask Fede. Our match end (gr) up 7-1.
Then Rafa arrived so we played Monopoli and Poker until 10 A.M!! Henry was so exicted (sp) because he ^ never won and that nigth (sp) he did it! could (gr) you belive (sp) it?
Later we went to buyed (gr) some ice-cream from "La Terraza", there the ice-cream is very tasty but a bit expensive. Then we went to Henry's house because It was his birthday and we ate a lot of chocolate cake.
Leandro..
Yesterday was a great day for me. I went to Joaquin's house and we have (gr) a lot of fun, there with Facu, Fede, Henry and Joauin (sp) ofcourse (sp) we ate some pizzas and we drank some Cocas (voc).
We have (gr) a lot of fun playing the playstation, as always (gr) I won all the games. If you don't trust me ask Fede. Our match end (gr) up 7-1.
Then Rafa arrived so we played Monopoli and Poker until 10 A.M!! Henry was so exicted (sp) because he ^ never won and that nigth (sp) he did it! could (gr) you belive (sp) it?
Later we went to buyed (gr) some ice-cream from "La Terraza", there the ice-cream is very tasty but a bit expensive. Then we went to Henry's house because It was his birthday and we ate a lot of chocolate cake.
Leandro..
Diary entry by Juan Pablo
Date?
Dear Diary,
Today i am writing to tell you something about my life. Last weekend i had a fifteen's party (voc) in Guarani Hotel. It was fun. They (gr) were many friends in the party, also people that i have (gr) never seen in my life who i danced with. The next day i woke up early and i spended (gr) my morning running ^ the "Costanera". Then i went to my house to eat a hamburger because it was my grandmum's birthday, there i met all my family. After that my best friend called to me to play a football match in "Danper", but i was sick so i couldn't go to play with him. Well, this is (gr) last week, after (gr) i ^ write again.
Juanpaa!
Dear Diary,
Today i am writing to tell you something about my life. Last weekend i had a fifteen's party (voc) in Guarani Hotel. It was fun. They (gr) were many friends in the party, also people that i have (gr) never seen in my life who i danced with. The next day i woke up early and i spended (gr) my morning running ^ the "Costanera". Then i went to my house to eat a hamburger because it was my grandmum's birthday, there i met all my family. After that my best friend called to me to play a football match in "Danper", but i was sick so i couldn't go to play with him. Well, this is (gr) last week, after (gr) i ^ write again.
Juanpaa!
Chungo Point
My extra homework is to post a photo and write down speculations looking at the picture. Here it is. kisses! NEUS TOSI
- Juan Miguel has a plaster. He might have hurt his hand playing football
- Mauro and Gabo have glasses. It must have been a sunny day
- They are all happy. They must be having fun
- Neus is wearing a uniform. They may be in the school
- They look like friends. they can't be bad persons
Diary entry: Agustina Escobar
Sunday, 15 September
Dear diary
Last weekend was AMAZING!. On Friday, I went to ''Paso de la Patria'' in the evening with my cousins. We arrived at night, so we thought that we were going to have dinner and then maybe we would fall sleep because we were very tired.
Suddenly, my young cousin appeared with a boardgame called ''Twister'' so we had fun with this.
Then we started to play with cards and when we finished I realised that it was 7:00 o'clock. I fell a sleep for about 5 hours and then, when I woke up we went to the beach, we played volleyball, football and many more sports.
I came back on Saturday at 9:00pm, I was very tired but I went to two fifteen birthday parties and I enjoyed those very much. I came back to my house at 7:00 am, I fell a sleep but at 10:00 am my mother woke me up to go to Paso de la Patria again.
Although I was very tired, I was excited to travel there because I was sure that we could have a great time. It was a wonderful weekend and I hope that the next will be better.
Photo in Paso de la Patria with my cousins:)
Dear diary
Last weekend was AMAZING!. On Friday, I went to ''Paso de la Patria'' in the evening with my cousins. We arrived at night, so we thought that we were going to have dinner and then maybe we would fall sleep because we were very tired.
Suddenly, my young cousin appeared with a boardgame called ''Twister'' so we had fun with this.
Then we started to play with cards and when we finished I realised that it was 7:00 o'clock. I fell a sleep for about 5 hours and then, when I woke up we went to the beach, we played volleyball, football and many more sports.
I came back on Saturday at 9:00pm, I was very tired but I went to two fifteen birthday parties and I enjoyed those very much. I came back to my house at 7:00 am, I fell a sleep but at 10:00 am my mother woke me up to go to Paso de la Patria again.
Although I was very tired, I was excited to travel there because I was sure that we could have a great time. It was a wonderful weekend and I hope that the next will be better.
Photo in Paso de la Patria with my cousins:)
Diary entry - Neus Tosi
(it isnt based on ^ true ^. Im a happy person and I love my family and my friends very much!)
Date?
Dear Diary,
It is difficult for me to explain with words my feelings but I will try to do that. This year was a bit strange to me. My friends have changed and they are not the same. My mother is different, too. She complain to (gr) me all the time and she doesn't hear me when I try to talk with her. My father doesn't live in my house so I don't see him a lot. Sometimes I miss my old life, when I was just a child and all seemed to be very easy. I didn't have problems and everything was OK, but I have to accept that I have grown up.
Neusita!
Date?
Dear Diary,
It is difficult for me to explain with words my feelings but I will try to do that. This year was a bit strange to me. My friends have changed and they are not the same. My mother is different, too. She complain to (gr) me all the time and she doesn't hear me when I try to talk with her. My father doesn't live in my house so I don't see him a lot. Sometimes I miss my old life, when I was just a child and all seemed to be very easy. I didn't have problems and everything was OK, but I have to accept that I have grown up.
Neusita!
sábado, 7 de junio de 2008
Diary Entry-Facu
14th June
What a wonderful Saturday! I can’t say that it was the best, but it was really close. Now, all that I want to do is sleep.
It started with a paddle match with my friends. Although we had to get up early to go to the paddle court (9:oo AM), we had a lot of fun. I was very tired after it, so I managed to sleep a bit.
I got up at 4, and as I saw that the weather was wonderful, I went to play a rugby match with other friends. I didn’t want to play rugby a lot, but we had a lot of fun too, and, obviously, I was more tired after that.
I went home to try to sleep a little more, but I couldn’t. I was nervous, because that night was one of the best 15’s birthday parties I ever had in all my life. I put on my best shirt and bowtie, and I was ready to dance all night! All there was fantastic, the food was terrific, there were a lot of people I knew, and the DJ was really cool.
In conclusion, I enjoyed a lot this Saturday, but now all that I want to do is to sit back and sleep a LOT.
Oh no! I almost forgot it; on Saturday was Enrique’s birthday. So happy birthday to you, I hope that you’ve enjoyed as well as me! Hahaha.
Facuu Avila.
viernes, 6 de junio de 2008
Diary entry- Flor Salas
Saturday, 27 September
Dear Diary,
Today I went out with a boy. His name is Drake and he's just perfect! He's my friend's new stepbrother.
We shared the whole afternoon together. While we were walking through the park he smiled at me in a special way more than once, in those moments I thought my heart could fly!
We talked about many things like 'family, music and films', then I realized we had a lot in common, and I've got a feeling we'll be so much more than friends!
In the end of the afternoon we decided that we should see each other again, so he asked me to go on a second date with him.
I wonder if I should tell him how I feel. Wouldn't it scare him away?
Well, however, only one thing is clear in my head, I can't get him off my mind and it scares me because I've never felt this way!
Oh dear diary, I can't wait to see Drake again!
Dear Diary,
Today I went out with a boy. His name is Drake and he's just perfect! He's my friend's new stepbrother.
We shared the whole afternoon together. While we were walking through the park he smiled at me in a special way more than once, in those moments I thought my heart could fly!
We talked about many things like 'family, music and films', then I realized we had a lot in common, and I've got a feeling we'll be so much more than friends!
In the end of the afternoon we decided that we should see each other again, so he asked me to go on a second date with him.
I wonder if I should tell him how I feel. Wouldn't it scare him away?
Well, however, only one thing is clear in my head, I can't get him off my mind and it scares me because I've never felt this way!
Oh dear diary, I can't wait to see Drake again!
THIS IS 'TOP SECRET' SO DIARY I'LL CONFIDE IN YOU
martes, 3 de junio de 2008
diary entry- akemi
Date?
In a party, I dont know why, but, I didnt feel so good as (gr) always (voc). I was sad, I dont remember why.
I was seat (voc/gr) in (gr) a chair, while my friends were dancing. When a friend, Andres, asked me to dance. I didnt want to, but I said yes. When I was with him I started to feel better.
The next day, when I was coming back from school, I met him. I dont know the reason ^, but I felt so happy when I saw him again. He walked me home.
All these happened a month ago. Since that moment, he always walks me home, and some days ^ meet on (gr) the afternoon.
Yesterday, when I was coming back from school, he took my hand. I saw him, and his face was red. I felted (gr) some unconfortable(sp) things in my stomach.
Today, I didnt see him. I felted (gr) so alone. What is happening with me? and what about him?, why did he turned so red that day? I'm so confused!
In a party, I dont know why, but, I didnt feel so good as (gr) always (voc). I was sad, I dont remember why.
I was seat (voc/gr) in (gr) a chair, while my friends were dancing. When a friend, Andres, asked me to dance. I didnt want to, but I said yes. When I was with him I started to feel better.
The next day, when I was coming back from school, I met him. I dont know the reason ^, but I felt so happy when I saw him again. He walked me home.
All these happened a month ago. Since that moment, he always walks me home, and some days ^ meet on (gr) the afternoon.
Yesterday, when I was coming back from school, he took my hand. I saw him, and his face was red. I felted (gr) some unconfortable(sp) things in my stomach.
Today, I didnt see him. I felted (gr) so alone. What is happening with me? and what about him?, why did he turned so red that day? I'm so confused!
Diary Entry/ Agus GF
This is my diary entry writing =).. enjoy it
Date?
Wow! i (gr) was a wonderful day yesterday. First , one of my best friends came home and spent the night there (gr). At 10 am in the morning we wento (sp) to Aranduroga's Club to play hockey against TRC. The good news is that we won
, and so my friend and I decided to stay at the club to watch the rugby game.
At night we returned home and we spent the night by the riverside.
Today my mom sent me to my uncle's house. At 3 pm I went to jog beside the river in the Costanera Aveneu (sp). Excepting (gr) for my discussions (voc) with my mom, the days were spectacular. I had a really nice time with my friend and with my family.
Aguus Gómez de la Fuente
Date?
Wow! i (gr) was a wonderful day yesterday. First , one of my best friends came home and spent the night there (gr). At 10 am in the morning we wento (sp) to Aranduroga's Club to play hockey against TRC. The good news is that we won
, and so my friend and I decided to stay at the club to watch the rugby game.At night we returned home and we spent the night by the riverside.
Today my mom sent me to my uncle's house. At 3 pm I went to jog beside the river in the Costanera Aveneu (sp). Excepting (gr) for my discussions (voc) with my mom, the days were spectacular. I had a really nice time with my friend and with my family.
CORRECTION :
Sunday 8, June 2008
Wow! yesterday was a wonderful day. First , one of my best friends came home and spent the night with me. At 10 am in the morning we went to Aranduroga's Club to play hockey against TRC. The good news is that we won , and so my friend and I decided to stay at the club to watch the rugby game. At night we returned home and we spent the night by the riverside. Today my mom sent me to my uncle's house. At 3 pm I went to jog beside the river in the Costanera Avenue. Exempted for discuss with my mom, the days were spectacular. I had a really nice time with my friend and with my family.
Aguus Gómez de la Fuente
ChugoPoint ¬¬
Today I had the chungopoint so my extra homework (¿?) is to post a "funny" photo, this is the only one that I found, so just enjoy, and please DONT leave comments =), and I will be very glad, because for the only reason i'm doing this is just not to have the 5 negatives ¬¬
martes, 29 de abril de 2008
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So, Juanchi, the bag of candies will be for you! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
and thank U ALL for participating.
XOXO
Miss M.
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Sony Ericsson W580i Walkman Black
It´s a piece of cake to use! it has pedometer and Fitness Applications Built-inWhat's In The Box With The Phone.
Additional Items Included - Battery, Charger, User Guide, USB Cable, Stereo HeadsetAdvanced Features
Digital Camera - 2.0 Megapixel Camera (1600 x 1200 Pixel Resolution Max), 5x Zoom, Picture Blogging
Streaming Multimedia Support - Yes, Streaming AT&T Music With Any MEdia Add-on Rate Plan Feature
MP3 Player - MP3/AAC Player, Playlists, Album Art, MegaBass, TrackID, Shake Control, USB Storage
FM Radio - Yes, 8 Preset Stations, RDS Message Compliant, Requires Stereo Headset As Antenna
Two-handed Gaming Experience - Yes, 3D Gaming Experience, Plus Multiplayer Action With Bluetooth
Bluetooth Wireless Technology - v2.0, Headset, Handsfree and DUN, OPP, FTP, HID, BIP, PAN, Sync Profiles
Video Capture / Camcorder - Yes, Max Length Determined Only By Available Phone Memory, H.263 and MPEG4 Files Supported
Bluetooth Stereo Headset (A2DP) - Yes
Voice-driven Menus - Yes, Train The Phone To Dial Up to 30 Numbers With Your Voice
Data Capable / Use This Phone As A Modem - Yes, With Software Sold Separately
PC Synchronization - Yes, With Software Sold SeparetelyMessaging Features
Mobile Web Browsing - Yes, With Image Support, With Any MEdia Value Bundle Add-on Rate Plan Feature
Multimedia Messaging - Yes, Share Videos, Audio, Pictures and Text
Instant Messenger Built-in - Yes
Text Messaging (SMS) - Yes, Plus Pre-created Message Templates
Email Client - Yes, POP3, IMAP, SMTP SupportPersonalization and Fun Features
Polyphonic Ringtones - Yes, 40 Chords, Downloadable
Custom Ringtones - Yes
Pre-loaded Ringtones - Yes
MP3 Ringtones - Yes, Plus AAC Real Music Ringtones Support, Downloadable
This cell phone has the edge over all other models!!!!!
Leandro's Product
Excelent Offer!!
This offer you can't find everywhere (wo)...you can't miss ^ offer! ^is too good to be sniffed at .
Fiat 600 never taxi!! we have it in 3 colours (red, white and black), model 78, at only $550!!
This car is very cosy.. very spacious, ^has new motor (voc), MP3 player, chrome wheels, the new Michelin tires, video games at the back too, so you can travel with the family in It with out problem while the kids play quiet (gr).
(Promotion valid until stock exhaust, 2oo units)
contact us at: 3783-4fito9
or at: http://www.thetigersrl.com/
ye gou jkaskjas.. Leandro=P
AGUSTINA'S PRODUCT
Hello everybody, I choose this product because I like it and I hope you like it.
NEW AMUSING NOTEBOOK! HP-530
I has the edge over all other models for technology and price. This attractive notebook has a lot of caracteristics, such as:
A great processor calleg Inter Core Duo TD300E, speed: 1.66 GHz, memory ram:512 MB, flat screen:14,4 wide, rigid disc:120 GB, reading of CDRW/DVDRW and it has a WIFE CONNECTION!
It has a compact shape,it isn't heavy and big so you could put it on your small bag wherever you go. In adiction, its a piece of cake to use,so don't worry about that.
30-DAY MONEY BACK GUARANTEE!
Our offer is not to be sniffed at!
phone: 0800-333-NOTE (6683)
website: www.technobook.com
domingo, 27 de abril de 2008
Product/Aguus GF =)
Hi everybody, I just was looking for things that I'll need in my life for complete this homework, and the first thing that goes to my mind was hockey, so i decide to look for stick's. In argentina, the online profesionals stick that one could see are "Gryphon", "Grays", "Mercian", "Malik" and "TK". I prefer to see all Maliks one, because these you only see in Bs As, and are the sticks that Luciana Aymar use... Here is the Malik "Gaucho"
A unique rounded handle/shaft design allows the stick to rotate quickly in the bottom hand for advanced skills. New 25mm 'Dribble Curve' is possibly Malik’s best mould ever. Popular German designed model.
U$425.00
I wish you like =)
Aguuus Gómez de la Fuente :)
jueves, 24 de abril de 2008
flor.s blog product
(Well.. i don't know what happened the first time i posted it.. so as you see i'm posting it again)
It's a MOTOROKR Z6:
*Price: $279.99 $299.99
*Availability: In Stock
*$20 instant music savings
What Comes in the Box:
*MOTOROKR™ Z6 phone
*Charger
*Battery (BC50)
*Battery Door
*Extra FREE Media (1GB Memory Card)
*512MB Memory Card
*Stereo Headset
*USB Data Cable
*User Manual
I love this mobile phone, don't you love it too?
Just look at it... it looks amazing and it has a lot of useful functions. You can call your friends or relatives, or whoever you want. You can send messages, but also you can have a lot of fun with your MOTOROKR Z6, for example listen to music, watch videos, etcetera. And now it has an extra free1GB memory card. It with help you to capture the moment with its perfect image definition camera.
This mobile phone has the edge over all the other models, and don't worry it's a piece of cake to use. In case you get confused about how to use it just read the user manual.
I hope you like it
Bye
It's a MOTOROKR Z6:
*Price: $279.99 $299.99
*Availability: In Stock
*$20 instant music savings
MOTOROKR™ Z6 QUICKSPECS:
*Compatible with Windows Media Player 11
*High speed data transfer with USB 2.0
*Integrated music player that supports multiple audio formats
*64 MB on-board plus 2 GB removable MicroSD card support
*Stereo Bluetooth® Wireless Technology
*2 megapixel camera with light and full screen viewfinder
*Video capture & playback
*High end finishes including a mirror-like finish, soft-touch feel, glass and metal
*New Linux™ operating system that incorporates kJava
*Enhanced user interface
*Synch contacts and media with PC
What Comes in the Box:
*MOTOROKR™ Z6 phone
*Charger
*Battery (BC50)
*Battery Door
*Extra FREE Media (1GB Memory Card)
*512MB Memory Card
*Stereo Headset
*USB Data Cable
*User Manual
I love this mobile phone, don't you love it too?
Just look at it... it looks amazing and it has a lot of useful functions. You can call your friends or relatives, or whoever you want. You can send messages, but also you can have a lot of fun with your MOTOROKR Z6, for example listen to music, watch videos, etcetera. And now it has an extra free1GB memory card. It with help you to capture the moment with its perfect image definition camera.
This mobile phone has the edge over all the other models, and don't worry it's a piece of cake to use. In case you get confused about how to use it just read the user manual.
I hope you like it
Bye
martes, 22 de abril de 2008
Akemis product description:
This is the product I choosed:
Motorola A1200 Cell Phone
Motorola A1200 Cell Phone
(GSM, Bluetooth, 2MP, 8MB, microSD Card)
Price: $235.00 - $315.00
Description: Motorola A1200 is a phone with transparent front cover. It has QVGA color Touch display and a 2 megapixel camera with macro mode. The internal memory is extended through microSd memory cards, that can store music in various formats for the music player.
Price: $235.00 - $315.00
Description: Motorola A1200 is a phone with transparent front cover. It has QVGA color Touch display and a 2 megapixel camera with macro mode. The internal memory is extended through microSd memory cards, that can store music in various formats for the music player.
I think this cell phone its has a cool modern design, its so attractive and unique... its so PERFECT!
I think you love it too! :)
Flor B's product :)
NEW CELULAR PHONE!
SGH-E256
Imagine the slider powered in your hands!
with radio FM , the E256 is the Samsung celular phone with the slider format affordable but comprehensive operational. Has MP3 player, the one you can expand with the Micro SD memory card, and digital camara and video with VGA resolution. ALso, you can conected on different dispositives by bluetooth, or download photos and video to the PC by puerto USB. With the Samsung E256 isn't to hard to imagine.
I CANT UPLOAD A PHOTO, SO CHECK IT IN GOOGLE (:
SGH-E256
Imagine the slider powered in your hands!
with radio FM , the E256 is the Samsung celular phone with the slider format affordable but comprehensive operational. Has MP3 player, the one you can expand with the Micro SD memory card, and digital camara and video with VGA resolution. ALso, you can conected on different dispositives by bluetooth, or download photos and video to the PC by puerto USB. With the Samsung E256 isn't to hard to imagine.
I CANT UPLOAD A PHOTO, SO CHECK IT IN GOOGLE (:
lunes, 21 de abril de 2008
juanchi´s product
Includes: Playlist.
Digital camera.
5 gigabytes memory.
4 films.
Total guaranted.
3 games.
Capacity for 30.000 songs.
Free software CD-ROM
Price $4.000 Internet connection.
Memory:5 GB
Brand:Ipod
product/LARITAA =)
Easyshrez1275Camara Kodak Digital 12 megapixele Price: $ 1.100,00 Light-prepared -- Button Share -- Button information -- Button Menu - Delete Button -- Button Review Button-Wide Angle -- Battery compartment Button tele - - Taking tripod - Ring for the belt -- Connector base -- Slot for SD or MMC -- Optional content of the Fund -- 2 Alkaline Batteries - USB Cable - Correa -- Software CD-ROM - Manuals - FUNDA - CHARGER
is it perfect! i really like it, and i wanted..
new cellphone/cadenas
*quickly internet connection
* Wi-fi
* the camera has 6 megapixeles for photos and for videos 5 megapixeles
* vibration call
*mensajes multimedia
*USB connection
* bluethoot
*java games
sábado, 12 de abril de 2008
From Juan Pablo Monzon Languasco
* Connect to the world faster.
* Get clearer photos and video.
* Navigate quickly and easily.
* Camera 5 Mega Pixels (photos and video).
* Wi-Fi.
* GPS and maps.
* Rafio FM.
* MP3 player.
* USB.
*E-mail.
And more...
This is an excellent product, I recommend it to you!
martes, 8 de abril de 2008
shopping problems/ juanchi´s story
Once I remember that I bought an Mp3. Then I tried it on the computer and it became crazy with a virus, it opened a lot of windows. So i had to change the Mp3, pay the difference and repair my computer because the Mp3 had broken it.
Shopping Problems / Fede Lopez
The last year I bought a microwave anda my brother put eggs to boil, when the eggs boiled, the microwave exploded like a bomb .
The shop assistant of Garbarino said that he couldn't change the microwave because it had food inside.
Shopping problems / Lucre
Once when I bought a blender for a party, to do drinks and stuff, we bought it and we tried it in my house, but then in the party the blender exploded, so the next day we went to the shop and claimed for another blender, but they didn't want to give us another, so my dad made a fuss, so they, finally, gave us a new blender, that worked...
Lucre
Lucre
Shopping Problems / Alan
One day, i bought an MP4 in Paraguay that it was broken. When i turned it on the screen became all white. So, when i went to complain about the problem, the shop assistant said that WE BROKE IT!! so i had to buy a new one.
shopping problem/akemi
One night, I asked for a complete pizza by delivery. When I opened the box of the pizza, two slice were missing!I called to the pizza place and explained the situation. They told me that they had commited a mistake, that the pizza that was in my house was for another person.So, I returned the wrong pizza, and they gave me a new one.
Product description - Facundo Avila
This is a picture of the new Microsoft Zune, the multimedia player of Microsoft.
I think that it is one of the best creations of microsoft, although it is not very famous. It is a really complete device.
There are 3 versions of it:
*the first generation: (bigger one) that has 30gb of memory, reproduces video and music, wireless connection.
*the second generation: (black one) that has 80gb of memory, reproduces video and music, and it has wireless connection and FM radio receptor
*the mini second generation: (red one) that has 4gb or 8gb of memory, reproduces video and music, and it has wireless connection.
Facu Avila
Shopping problems/ Agustina Gómez de la Fuente
Once, i bought a radio, when the mp3 didn't even exist, when I was 8.
The first week, it worked very good, but the following week it stopped, and it never worked again. 2 years ago, my mum decided to send the radio to the technician, and the problem was that it didn' have batteries.
Aguuus GF=)
The first week, it worked very good, but the following week it stopped, and it never worked again. 2 years ago, my mum decided to send the radio to the technician, and the problem was that it didn' have batteries.
Aguuus GF=)
From Neusitaa
This is one of the products that people buy without knowing if it works very well. they see the advert on Tv or online, they buy it by phone with a creditcard and the company send the product to their houses. It is: CELLTONE, a cream that is supposed to keep your skin young and fresh for a long time and also fix it if it is aged, with stains or with wrinkles. The best is that it contains baba de caracol, an almost magic ingredient with a partucular characteristic: it can recompose the skin.
In my opinion, if you buy that, you are just loosing money. Instead of that, you have to go to the skin-doctor and ask him what you can do with the problem.
shopping problem / Flor S.
I just had a problem with a product once. It was about 9 months ago when my dad bought a new TV, it looked amazing and it had a perfect image definition, but not everything was perfect. There were times that when we turned it on it got turned off itself, we had to press the ON button more than twice. The other problem was the sound, the TV made a funny noise a lot of times when it was on at many channels.
Finally, my dad went to the shop where he bought it and he took it back with the receipt and the guarantee in his hands. Then he came back home with a bigger and more amazing TV. =)
Finally, my dad went to the shop where he bought it and he took it back with the receipt and the guarantee in his hands. Then he came back home with a bigger and more amazing TV. =)
Shopping problems / Juan Pablo Monzon Languasco
One day i bought a skateboard and it had one wheel broken. I went to the local shop to complain and the assistant changed it for another one and this other was better than the first, because it was bigger.
Shopping Problem/ Fede Aquino
Once I bought a mobile phone, but when I tried to use it, it turned off and made a strange noise. So I went to the shop and explained the problem to the manager. He told me that it was a problem from the factory and he would change it for another one.
3 Days later my new cell phone was working fine and I didn't have any problems with it.
3 Days later my new cell phone was working fine and I didn't have any problems with it.
The End
shopping problem / flor b
One day I went to Arcor, and I bought an alfajor, and it was without dulce de leche, so I called Arcor and a week later they sent me a box of sweets and alfajores to my house. :)
Flor.B =)
Flor.B =)
shopping problem santiago cadenas
one day I went to garbarino to buy a calculator, I bought it and when i turned it on i saw that the bottom of the numbers 1 and 9 didn't work so I went to garbarino again to claim for another calculator . I talked to the manager and I showed the problem, he talked with another person an he said please sorry for the inconvenient and take this new calculator
Shopping Problems/Enrique Durand de Cassis
Here is the homework:
Once i bought a cell phone with mp3 and a camera. But the camera wasn't good. When i tried to return it , tne manager of gabardino said sorry to me because of the bad conditions of the camera and they give me a new cell phone.
It's an invented shopping problem
Once i bought a cell phone with mp3 and a camera. But the camera wasn't good. When i tried to return it , tne manager of gabardino said sorry to me because of the bad conditions of the camera and they give me a new cell phone.
It's an invented shopping problem
shopping problem / Lara
One day, last year i bought a t-shirt, and when i wanted to put it on, my mother saw a little hole on it!.. so we went with the ticket to the shop, enad i showed that to the manager, and the shop assistant gave me another but in a different colour! =)
Shopping problem / Neus Tosi
from me, to you. "My experience"
I was really happy with my new cellphone. It had everything I wanted. But unfortunately it wasn't like that for a long time. A week after I bought it, the earphone stopped working very well so I went to "Personal" but they didn't give me a good answer. They said that It was my responsability. After that I never bought a cellphone there anymore in my life!!
Neuss
I was really happy with my new cellphone. It had everything I wanted. But unfortunately it wasn't like that for a long time. A week after I bought it, the earphone stopped working very well so I went to "Personal" but they didn't give me a good answer. They said that It was my responsability. After that I never bought a cellphone there anymore in my life!!
Neuss
Shopping Problem/LEANDRO
Once I went tu buy an ice-cream. I took it and gave my money to the shop assistant. Before opening my ice-cream I noticed that it was melted so I asked for another one.
I wanted to change it and the icecream boy allowed me to do the change. And I was happy with my my not melted ice-cream..
Leandro..=D
I wanted to change it and the icecream boy allowed me to do the change. And I was happy with my my not melted ice-cream..
Leandro..=D
SHOPPING PROBLEMS/ AGUS ESCOBAR
For my birthday, my aunt gave me a camera and I was very excited, but when I was using it I realised that it had a problem: when I wanted to delete a photo, the bottom didn't work, so I talked with my mum and we went to Garbarino. First, it was a bit difficult to change the camera for another one because it was a special offer so the guarantee was over, but my mum talked to the boss and he gave us another one and an extra pressent: chocolates.
Agus Escobar..
=)
Shopping Problems - Facundo Avila
"Once when I bought an mp3, 3 years ago more or less. I was really excited about it, so I connected it to the pc when I arrived home. Unfortunately, in the moment that I connected the mp3, a thunder stroke on my computer, and it seemed that it turned of and the mp3 got burnt.
Inmediatly I went back to the shop, and explained the problem to the shop assistant. In a very kind way, he gave me another one."
Facu Avila
domingo, 6 de abril de 2008
WHICH IS YOUR FAVOURITE AD?
miércoles, 2 de abril de 2008
martes, 1 de abril de 2008
juanchi´s advert - Drinking Beer Delays Death
this is my advert its better than the jamaica´s beer.I hope you like it. And I hope to win the bag of sweets. Bye.
juanchi´s advert - johnny walker advert
this is another ardvert that I like it too much. I hope you like it.
cadenas advert
domingo, 30 de marzo de 2008
Fede Aquino's Advert (corrected)
I'm sorry but the last address I sent was wrong.
This is the correct one:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2CWMEKnijU
This is the correct one:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2CWMEKnijU
Enrique's Advert
I couldn't upload my video sow here is a link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3W21Na6QKRs
THIS ADVERT IS REPEATED. AGUSTINA POSTED IT FIRST.
THIS ADVERT IS REPEATED. AGUSTINA POSTED IT FIRST.
viernes, 28 de marzo de 2008
leandro's advert
this advert is the best one..!!(the cat is under the table)
Im late I know but
I couldn't upload before
because I had problems with the video:S
so here you have..http://youtube.com/watch?v=qPY1WalMy-M&feature=related
Leandro..=P
Im late I know but
I couldn't upload before
because I had problems with the video:S
so here you have..http://youtube.com/watch?v=qPY1WalMy-M&feature=related
Leandro..=P
jueves, 27 de marzo de 2008
miércoles, 26 de marzo de 2008
Akemi's ADVERT
hello everybody! Here is my advert,
Is about the Nikon Camera.
I think its original and funny.Enjoy it!=D
Is about the Nikon Camera.
I think its original and funny.Enjoy it!=D
martes, 25 de marzo de 2008
Advertising
hello!
Here I have the edge over all other adverts: 7up's advert
you can see this advert,just clic here
Please leave a coment
bye!
Agus Escobar
Here I have the edge over all other adverts: 7up's advert
you can see this advert,just clic here
Please leave a coment
bye!
Agus Escobar
Advert of Fede Lopezz
Hi, this is the advert that I chose because it is funny and I think that it represents me because I like the summer and a Quilmes beer.
Bye!
Bye!
Advert. John Paul Monzon Languasco
Hey people, this is my favourite advert.
It's an honda Civic Coupe advert,
this is the sport version of my car,
Enjoy it!
It's an honda Civic Coupe advert,
this is the sport version of my car,
Enjoy it!
Advertising. Flor Salas
This is one of my fave adverts in the last years.
Coca Cola always knows how to make me love its adverts.
This one is from 2006, when Argentina was playing The FIFA World Cup Germany 2006
"EN ESTO ESTAMOS JUNTOS, AGUANTE ARGENTINA EN LA COPA DEL MUNDO"
I guess you remember about it!
Anyway, sit back and enjoy it!
Coca Cola always knows how to make me love its adverts.
This one is from 2006, when Argentina was playing The FIFA World Cup Germany 2006
"EN ESTO ESTAMOS JUNTOS, AGUANTE ARGENTINA EN LA COPA DEL MUNDO"
I guess you remember about it!
Anyway, sit back and enjoy it!
Advertising Flor Bendersky
Well, here is the advert of quilmes, it is very old, but I like it.
Enjoy it :)
Enjoy it :)
ADVERTISING - Facundo Avila
well,
here it is the video that the teacher asked us to upload.
It is about an advert, the Schneider's beer advert. I think that it is very original and funny, because it has an special message.
I hope you will enjoy it, and vote for it;)
Facundo Avila.
Subject Syllabus
Hello everyone!
this post is to let you know that the English syllabus (programa de la materia) is on line in EL SABIO.
It's ready to print.
XOXO
Miss M.
this post is to let you know that the English syllabus (programa de la materia) is on line in EL SABIO.
It's ready to print.
XOXO
Miss M.
Birthday boy
Today is Leandro's Birthday, so we sang the HAPPY BIRTHDAY song for him this morning.
Hope you have a great day Leo!
XXOO
Hope you have a great day Leo!
XXOO
This is the Birthday boy...
jueves, 20 de marzo de 2008
ADVERTISING!
Hi there!
As we are working with the topic: ADVERTISING, you'll have to search for an original advert on line and then upload it. It can be an image or a commercial spot (video).
We'll vote for our favourite when all the 17 adverts are uploaded.
I've found these funny commercials, let see if you like them....
Miss M.
As we are working with the topic: ADVERTISING, you'll have to search for an original advert on line and then upload it. It can be an image or a commercial spot (video).
We'll vote for our favourite when all the 17 adverts are uploaded.
I've found these funny commercials, let see if you like them....
Miss M.
WELCOME!!!!!
Hi everyone!
Welcome to our blog!
this is the place on line where 4TH A from Yapeyú School will post every assignment I give them and other things that represent us as a class group.
Here you'll find information, news, photos, images, videos and much more!
We hope you enjoy reading the posts and we are looking forward to reading your comments!
kisses
Miss Mariana (The Teacher)
Welcome to our blog!
this is the place on line where 4TH A from Yapeyú School will post every assignment I give them and other things that represent us as a class group.
Here you'll find information, news, photos, images, videos and much more!
We hope you enjoy reading the posts and we are looking forward to reading your comments!
kisses
Miss Mariana (The Teacher)
We are:
I'm Mariana Gebhard, the teacher
My students are:
Fede Aquino, Facu Ávila, Flor Bendersky, Santi Cadenas, Enrique "Henry" Durand De Cassis, Agus Escobar, Lara García, Agus Gómez de la Fuente, Alan Guerzovich, Fede López, JP Monzón Languasco, Akemi Mori, Lucre Ninamango Penz, Juanchi Ojeda Leone, Leo Pujol, Flor Salas y Neus Tosi Aromí.
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