20 May
Dear diary:
Yesterday it was very cold and had a 15 birthday party. But I hadn’t a sweter to wear. So I ask my mother if my father, that was in a trip, had a sweter. But they were very big for me. So in that moment I said to my mother “see if you had bought me a sweter the other week I’ll has to go now”. Then I was very angry and mom don’t leave myself to go because of that. But I went because I was very angry. It was very cold. When I arrived to Fede’s house he gave to me one sweter, I was lucky. But today on the dinner my sister knew that I went, so she say to e how the birthday was. I want to kill my sister. But my mother doesn’t say anything, I was surprised.
Henry
martes, 24 de junio de 2008
domingo, 22 de junio de 2008
diary entry - juanpablo
22 of June 08.
Dear Diary,Today I am writing to tell you something about my life. Last weekend I had a fifteen's party in Guarani Hotel. It was fun. They are many friends in the party, also people that I had never seen in my life who I danced with. The next day I woke up early and I spended the morning running to the "Costanera". Then I went to my house to eat a hamburger because it was my grandmum's birthday, there I met all my family. After that my best friend called to me to play a football match in "Danper", but I was sick so I couldn't go to play with him. Well, this is the last week, after I am write again.
Dear Diary,Today I am writing to tell you something about my life. Last weekend I had a fifteen's party in Guarani Hotel. It was fun. They are many friends in the party, also people that I had never seen in my life who I danced with. The next day I woke up early and I spended the morning running to the "Costanera". Then I went to my house to eat a hamburger because it was my grandmum's birthday, there I met all my family. After that my best friend called to me to play a football match in "Danper", but I was sick so I couldn't go to play with him. Well, this is the last week, after I am write again.
martes, 17 de junio de 2008
diary entry- Larita
Dear diary:
Today, a day after my 15th birthday, I want to tell you that all the party was like a dream, all was perfect. It was 12 o’clock, and I was getting in with my father and with my beautiful, white dress.. All muy friends were there, looking ^ me. It was very emotional.
I danced all the (iw) night, with my gest (sp/gr), my family and all the people that were there.
Today, I think.. all that preparation, and now all (gr) is something that happened and (iw) very fast, so I’m not very happy in that way, but that night, now and for ever is (gr) the best , an unforgettable memory!
I’ (gr) very happy, I resived (sp) a lot of presents..
Today, a day after my 15th birthday, I want to tell you that all the party was like a dream, all was perfect. It was 12 o’clock, and I was getting in with my father and with my beautiful, white dress.. All muy friends were there, looking ^ me. It was very emotional.
I danced all the (iw) night, with my gest (sp/gr), my family and all the people that were there.
Today, I think.. all that preparation, and now all (gr) is something that happened and (iw) very fast, so I’m not very happy in that way, but that night, now and for ever is (gr) the best , an unforgettable memory!
I’ (gr) very happy, I resived (sp) a lot of presents..
domingo, 15 de junio de 2008
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martes, 10 de junio de 2008
Diary entry - Lucree
Sunday, 15 September
Dear diary:
Yesterday I went to a friend’s birthday party with my friends.
There I have (gr) a lot of fun! I spend (gr) all night with a friend...God! He is (gr) perfect!
I already (iw) met him ^ one of my friends introduce (gr) us. His name is Jack, I met him a couple weekends before (voc). I gave him my telephone-number so he said he can (gr) call me. Yesterday, HE CALLS (gr) ME! We went out. We went, first, to the cinema, and then we went to the park. There we talk (gr) for hours, we talk (gr) about everything, like friends, family…you know…
I’m so happy! We have so much in common! Except for one thing, well, for two things…his friends and the girls…the problem with his friends it’s (gr)that they are really stupid, and with the girls it’s really difficult because all the girls are behind (voc) him. He is a really handsome boy.
So yesterday we have (gr) a great time. He said he’s (gr) gonna call me again one of those (gr) days! I can’t wait! I hope we could be more than friends…
Yesterday I went to a friend’s birthday party with my friends.
There I have (gr) a lot of fun! I spend (gr) all night with a friend...God! He is (gr) perfect!
I already (iw) met him ^ one of my friends introduce (gr) us. His name is Jack, I met him a couple weekends before (voc). I gave him my telephone-number so he said he can (gr) call me. Yesterday, HE CALLS (gr) ME! We went out. We went, first, to the cinema, and then we went to the park. There we talk (gr) for hours, we talk (gr) about everything, like friends, family…you know…
I’m so happy! We have so much in common! Except for one thing, well, for two things…his friends and the girls…the problem with his friends it’s (gr)that they are really stupid, and with the girls it’s really difficult because all the girls are behind (voc) him. He is a really handsome boy.
So yesterday we have (gr) a great time. He said he’s (gr) gonna call me again one of those (gr) days! I can’t wait! I hope we could be more than friends…
Lucreciaaa
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lunes, 9 de junio de 2008
Diary entry - Flor.B =)
4th June 1996
Dear diary,
Today, was a wonderful day and now I'm very happy. Pablo called me to go to the cinema, there he took my hand. Then we went to the riverside to walk, it was very sweet. Later, my mother called me, so he went with me to my house. When we were going he asked me if I liked Pedro, and I answer no but I didn't have the courage to say that I loved him. Suddenly, I notice that he get sad, so I took the necessary courage and I said him that I loved him. I stayed very nervous because he didn't say anything to me but suddenly he told me that I was the love of his life and he kissed me.
When we were outside of my house I was waiting him to ask me to be his girlfriend but he didn't say anything, he only said that we couldn't be boyfriend and girlfriend because his friend wanted me. But that didn't make me sad or dissapointed me because I know that he want me, I was everything for me.
Dear diary,
Today, was a wonderful day and now I'm very happy. Pablo called me to go to the cinema, there he took my hand. Then we went to the riverside to walk, it was very sweet. Later, my mother called me, so he went with me to my house. When we were going he asked me if I liked Pedro, and I answer no but I didn't have the courage to say that I loved him. Suddenly, I notice that he get sad, so I took the necessary courage and I said him that I loved him. I stayed very nervous because he didn't say anything to me but suddenly he told me that I was the love of his life and he kissed me.
When we were outside of my house I was waiting him to ask me to be his girlfriend but he didn't say anything, he only said that we couldn't be boyfriend and girlfriend because his friend wanted me. But that didn't make me sad or dissapointed me because I know that he want me, I was everything for me.
flooorr
diary entry-juan ojeda
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Dear diary;
Yesterday was a horrible day that all is (gr) wrong.
When I got up my mother started shouting because of my little brother.when I got up she started shouting ^ me with (gr) no reason.
Then, my little brother shouted all day and I have (gr) to play with him, because my mother was preparing dinner for today, my grandmother was helping my mother and my other brother was watching television as the king of scotland.
Last night when my little brother slept (gr), I was going to a party, but my mother said that I was dressed like a gothic person,and I only have (gr) a black shirt. I could not go to the party yesterday so , I kicked all (gr) that I found in my way.
What ^ horrible day, Don´t you think so?
Dear diary;
Yesterday was a horrible day that all is (gr) wrong.
When I got up my mother started shouting because of my little brother.when I got up she started shouting ^ me with (gr) no reason.
Then, my little brother shouted all day and I have (gr) to play with him, because my mother was preparing dinner for today, my grandmother was helping my mother and my other brother was watching television as the king of scotland.
Last night when my little brother slept (gr), I was going to a party, but my mother said that I was dressed like a gothic person,and I only have (gr) a black shirt. I could not go to the party yesterday so , I kicked all (gr) that I found in my way.
What ^ horrible day, Don´t you think so?
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